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john_amend_all ([personal profile] john_amend_all) wrote2013-11-01 07:10 pm

Fic: Ac Velut In Somnis (14/14)

And now, the conclusion. The path has been a long one; my thanks to those who trod it with me.

Title: Ac Velut In Somnis (14/14)
Author: [personal profile] john_amend_all
Characters: Tenth Doctor, Rose, Adam, Lynda, Nancy; Treguard, Majida, Lord Fear, Lissard
Crossover: With Knightmare
Rating: All ages
Word count: 30180 in total, 1901 this part
Disclaimer: "Doctor Who" characters belong to the BBC. "Knightmare" characters were created by Tim Child.
Summary: Rose had had enough adventures that she could probably have walked through one blindfolded. This time, she would have to do precisely that.
Chapter Summary: The Doctor, Rose and their advisors depart from Knightmare Castle.

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[identity profile] canadanne.livejournal.com 2013-11-01 10:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I think this is the first time I've read a fanfic in weekly instalments, and I have very much enjoyed doing so. :) You wrote all the characters very well, and there were some great cliffhangers that left me trying to guess how they'd escape from the current predicament. Loved the ending in particular. The only part that bothered me was the old "No, it's a real dragon!" / "If you say so" conversation, which I'm thoroughly tired of hearing in fanworks; Snapper-Jack is one of my favourite characters so I wish people wouldn't always focus on the unconvincing prop they gave him! Also, sorry but I totally did the "One does not simply walk into Marblehead" joke first. :p Other than that, though, one of the best Knightmare fanfics I've read (and I think I've read them all) - many thanks for letting us know about it on the forum! The Wacky Races drabble amused me too, btw. I hope you'll write more KM fic in the future. :)

[identity profile] canadanne.livejournal.com 2013-11-01 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that happened to me too, actually - I wrote a fic before reading anyone else's, and several of my brilliant ideas were in fact depressingly unoriginal, haha. Yours was mostly full of fresh twists, though!

Any and all KM fanworks are worth mentioning; they don't come along very often! I wasn't previously aware of AO3 so the stories on there had escaped my attention.
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[personal profile] pedanther 2013-11-04 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
I enjoyed that.