I think this is the first time I've read a fanfic in weekly instalments, and I have very much enjoyed doing so. :) You wrote all the characters very well, and there were some great cliffhangers that left me trying to guess how they'd escape from the current predicament. Loved the ending in particular. The only part that bothered me was the old "No, it's a real dragon!" / "If you say so" conversation, which I'm thoroughly tired of hearing in fanworks; Snapper-Jack is one of my favourite characters so I wish people wouldn't always focus on the unconvincing prop they gave him! Also, sorry but I totally did the "One does not simply walk into Marblehead" joke first. :p Other than that, though, one of the best Knightmare fanfics I've read (and I think I've read them all) - many thanks for letting us know about it on the forum! The Wacky Races drabble amused me too, btw. I hope you'll write more KM fic in the future. :)
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Date: 2013-11-01 10:47 pm (UTC)