Commentary meme

[john_amend_all]

Memed from lost_spook:

Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any story I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you’d expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

Or, if you're lucky, commentary from the characters.

Donna: Was I in this one? I don't remember a thing about it.
Ten: Ah. Yes. Well, there's a perfectly good explanation for that...